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Reply Mon 22 Feb, 2021 08:58 am
Which sentence is clearer and a better choice:

He is asking for more detail about ice and water shield for the roof, the electrical work, and fire rated drywall and ceiling specifications.
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He is asking for more details about ice and water shield for the roof, the electrical work, and fire rated drywall and ceiling specifications.
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He is requesting more detail(s) regarding ice and water shield for the roof, the electrical work, and fire rated drywall and ceiling specifications.
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Reply Fri 26 Feb, 2021 10:56 am
@LBrinkmann,
Use past tense. He has asked/requested..
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