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Reply Wed 20 Jan, 2021 12:42 pm
Are these sentences clear or is there a better way by combining them:

The repairs were scheduled to begin this week but the insured cancelled. We will work with her on rescheduling.
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Reply Thu 21 Jan, 2021 04:13 am
@LBrinkmann,
They’re fine, the only minor change I would make it change her to them. When you first mentioned the insured they are gender neutral, using them is consistent.

Having said that it is fine as it is.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Thu 21 Jan, 2021 11:21 am
@izzythepush,
Thank you!
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