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Reply Thu 5 Nov, 2020 01:19 pm
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

There were not any additional repairs not included on the estimate and we’re okay to close the claim.
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Reply Thu 5 Nov, 2020 04:43 pm
@LBrinkmann,
The two negations in the sentence make it unclear. I had to read it twice to get the gist of it. So, one can assume that any additional repairs were included on the estimate? Try a sentence with only one negation.
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