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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2020 12:51 pm
Which sentence is clearer and a better choice:

This change from 10/30 is because of the material delivery delay due to the virus.
or
This change from 10/30 is due to the material delivery delay because of the virus.
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2020 04:27 pm
@LBrinkmann,
They're equally clear. The better choice is subjective. With that said, I like the second one better.
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Reply Wed 28 Oct, 2020 09:23 am
@InfraBlue,
Thank you!
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