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Reply Wed 2 Sep, 2020 07:06 am
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

He left me a message that the pricing for the gutters is $801.00 and are scheduled for installation on or before 9/14.
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Reply Wed 2 Sep, 2020 07:30 am
@LBrinkmann,
The way you have it written, the subject for the second clause would have to be "pricing" which is not what you want. I would go with:

He left me a message that the pricing for the gutters is $801 and installation is scheduled on or before 9/14.
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