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Reply Wed 26 Aug, 2020 09:29 am
Which sentence is clearer or is there a better choice:

We are working with the insured about the remaining repairs.
or
We are working with the insured on the remaining repairs.
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Sturgis
 
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Reply Wed 26 Aug, 2020 01:39 pm
@LBrinkmann,
Both are clear. That said, I prefer the sound of the second sentence.

If I had crafted the sentence, I'd have gone with, We are working with the insured regarding remaining repairs.
mark noble
 
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Reply Thu 27 Aug, 2020 07:21 am
@LBrinkmann,
You could go 'archaic' & 'archa'ot'ic'

'We'eth doeth worketh witheth thee'eth insuredeth abouteth thee'eth remainingeth repaireths'.

Depends where your psyche's at, of course.
Marketh
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LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Thu 27 Aug, 2020 11:23 am
@Sturgis,
Thank you.
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