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Reply Wed 12 Aug, 2020 12:48 pm
Is this sentence clear on who would return from vacation or is there a better choice? Brennon would be the one returning from vacation.

Brennon is meeting with Mark on 7/28 when he returns from vacation.
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Reply Wed 12 Aug, 2020 01:16 pm
@LBrinkmann,
No, it’s not clear. I would have said it was Mark.

When Brennan returns from his holiday he will be meeting Mark on 28/7.

Sorry I’m English, I can’t bring myself to use American phrasing or dates.
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Reply Wed 12 Aug, 2020 01:21 pm
@izzythepush,
Thank you!
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