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Does this sentence have any logical or grammar issues?

 
 
Reply Mon 13 Jan, 2020 02:01 pm
The process is the record of all the things we have done during 3 weeks of the preparation for the exhibition and the problems that we have encountered in the process.
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Reply Mon 13 Jan, 2020 03:24 pm
@Evildevil4787,
In this instance, the process is a means to an end, a record. It's not the end in itself. Also, it's unclear as to what process is referred to by the second mention of "process." Is it self-referential? If it is, it would be better to say, "the process is the recording of all the things we have done during 3 weeks of preparation for the exhibition, and the problems that we have encountered during that process.
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