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Reply Mon 16 Dec, 2019 10:23 am
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice?

Please either text him the amount for his consideration or let me know what it is so that I can let him know.
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Reply Mon 16 Dec, 2019 10:36 am
@LBrinkmann,
The sentence can be understood; however, it's rather cumbersome.

Please text him the amount for consideration; or, give me the information and I will let him know.



Since the information will be provided to you or another, the use of 'either' is not necessary.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Mon 16 Dec, 2019 11:07 am
@Sturgis,
Great, thank you!
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