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Reply Tue 26 Nov, 2019 02:13 pm
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

We are in the process of arranging contents to be moved so that we can proceed with the carpet installation.
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Reply Tue 26 Nov, 2019 03:01 pm
@LBrinkmann,
While the sentence can be understood, it comes across rather oddly. Uncomfortably.

If writing the sentence myself, I'd perhaps do it this way: We are in the process of arranging the contents to be moved so we can proceed with carpet installation.
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Reply Tue 26 Nov, 2019 03:15 pm
@Sturgis,
Thank you!
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