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Fri 22 Nov, 2019 01:42 pm
Which sentence is clearer or is there a better choice?
Trusses have been ordered, and we are waiting for a delivery date so that we can schedule installation.
Trusses have been ordered, and we are waiting for a delivery date in order to schedule installation.
Thank you.
@LBrinkmann,
Both are clear.
It would depend upon my mood at the time of writing to determine which I would choose.
@LBrinkmann,
They're both clear. The second one is more concise, less wordy.
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