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Reply Fri 22 Nov, 2019 01:42 pm
Which sentence is clearer or is there a better choice?

Trusses have been ordered, and we are waiting for a delivery date so that we can schedule installation.

Trusses have been ordered, and we are waiting for a delivery date in order to schedule installation.

Thank you.

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Sturgis
 
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Reply Fri 22 Nov, 2019 03:37 pm
@LBrinkmann,
Both are clear.

It would depend upon my mood at the time of writing to determine which I would choose.
InfraBlue
 
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Reply Fri 22 Nov, 2019 05:13 pm
@LBrinkmann,
They're both clear. The second one is more concise, less wordy.
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LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Tue 26 Nov, 2019 12:34 pm
@Sturgis,
Thank you!
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