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Fri 24 May, 2019 03:01 pm
This sentence is really long and I was wondering if anyone knew if it is grammatically correct. Also if anyone has any ideas on how I could possibly re-write it, I would be super grateful!
"The system will calculate things like the time of the match so the match may start off slow and then get faster toward the middle, have a break after some awesome move combinations, and then pick back up to finish the match."
@nicoleitig,
No, it's very wordy. I'd split it up:
"The system will calculate several things regarding the match. This will include the match time, so that the game will start off slow, and get faster towards the middle. It will then have a break after some awesome move combinations, and then pick back up to finish the match."
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