culture differences

There are a lot of errors in your essay.

I will point out three but there are more.
1) Place names are capitalized - Africa, Morocco, etc. and that includes when you use a variant as an adjective, such as Moroccan.
2) A few of your sentences don't have any punctuation at the end. You need a period, exclamation point, question mark, maybe an ellipsis or even an interrobang but you need something.
3) Religions are capitalized and that also includes when a variation is used as an adjective, such as Buddhist or Islam or Islamic.

Correct those and run spellcheck, for starters.

Morocco is a north African country fairly close to Spain. (You need to explain how culture is enriched. "Position" is part of it, but does not explain much by itself.)
(Nonsense sentence deleted.)
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This country is rich with many different traditions, customs and languages. Arabs, Christians and Jews live together in peace.
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I invite your comments and opinions about my essay and also correcting my mistakes.
Thanks very much.

You need to read what you write and decide whether it sounds the way you meant it to sound. Pay special attention to correct punctuation and be sure sentences are complete.

You need to read novels. Lots of novels. Any novels. Notice that they all have perfect spelling, perfect punctuation, perfect composition. Notice where they use one space and where they use two. Notice that every speaker in a dialog gets a new paragraph, and every paragraph is preceded by a blank line. Notice any writing techniques or figures of speech. Take notes so you know where you found what you know. It takes a lot of reading to be a writer.

yes culture diffenerce are increasing

Thanks so much for your advices and comments i will take them into account

Thank you very much. I will take all your advices into consideration

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