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Wed 23 Jan, 2019 11:14 pm
"Being a volunteer can let us have a new angle to observe the society, which is helpful to our way of thinking in our future."
I think this sentence is not proper, espcially the which clause. Could you please favor me your revision? Many thanks!
@hkhlcq,
I see no problem.
In "our way of thinking in our future" I would change 'our' to 'the'. That's a matter of preference, of course.
@hkhlcq,
Roger, thanks a lot!
I think " let us have" is not direct as "allow us a new angle", and the which clause should be "which will be helpful to the way of thinking in the future". But, in fact, if you have a volunteer job, it is helpful mostly to your present way of thinking.
@roger,
Roger, thanks a lot!
I think " let us have" is not direct compared with "allow us a new angle", and the which clause should be "which will be helpful to the way of thinking in the future". But, in fact, if you have a volunteer job, it is helpful mostly to your present way of thinking.
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