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hkhlcq
 
Reply Wed 23 Jan, 2019 05:20 pm
"All game contents need to upgrade with the development of society. "
" The development of society" is general, while "game contents need to upgrade" comparatively specific. Is this sentence coherent?
Thanks!
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Reply Wed 23 Jan, 2019 08:01 pm
@hkhlcq,
There's missing context here, but I do not find the sentence by itself coherent.

Are you speaking of video games?
Are you asking whether the content of such games should reflect changes in society's values?
hkhlcq
 
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Reply Wed 23 Jan, 2019 09:44 pm
@blatham,
Yes, it is video game.
It is not my sentence. I found it in my reading, but I am not sure whether it is coherent or not.
Thank you for your explanation!
blatham
 
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Reply Fri 25 Jan, 2019 07:34 am
@hkhlcq,
It's poorly written and is not coherent.
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