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Reply Mon 10 Dec, 2018 06:54 am
Which is clearer and a better option:

The repairs were completed with the exception of the flooring transition installation.

or

The repairs were completed with the exception of the installation of the flooring transition.


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Reply Mon 10 Dec, 2018 02:15 pm
@dabbadabba,
I'd go with the second. Both are clear, the first is a bit choppy.
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