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Reply Tue 9 Oct, 2018 08:09 am
Which is clearer:

In response to your request for an itemized receipt for the work completed, I've attached an itemized final estimate.

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I've attached an itemized final estimate in response to your request for an itemized receipt for the work completed.
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Reply Tue 9 Oct, 2018 02:03 pm
@dabbadabba,
Go with the first. It also acknowledges the customer before indicating what you have done; which, places the client as the main priority.
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