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Furthermore, as a Christian believer, being a part of the Christian Institute and a community who brings many other believers in the same community can be very positive and motivational and that would be great a step forward for me, which makes me even more determined for applying with C University.

Being part of this spectacular educational and spiritual community makes this step even more appealing to take.

I am confident this would be a great opportunity to meet and interact with so many others who share so many things in common in such a great environment.