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Fri 11 May, 2018 06:54 pm
"I had this image of us, all grey and wrinkly, and me working in the garden and you re-painting the deck." I think this sentence should be "I had this image of us, all grey and wrinkly, me working in the garden and you re-painting the deck", because "me doing and you doing" is a specific action of the grey and wrinkly us.
@hkhlcq,
It's good the way it's written. The additional "and" emphasizes the list quality of the "image of us," that "I" had.
I would say:
, with me working in the garden ...
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