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Tue 27 Mar, 2018 06:55 am
‘She watched the waves as they rolled by, feeling discouraged she started to cry.’
Is this correct?
English is my second language...thanks for any help!
Two distinct sentences here:
She watched the waves as they rolled by. Feeling discouraged, she started to cry.
or
‘She watched the waves as they rolled by, and, feeling discouraged, she started to cry.’
@PUNKEY,
Thank you. I think I will go with 2 sentences.
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