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Please correct my grammar

 
 
Reply Tue 13 Mar, 2018 01:58 pm
4 million dollars new goal booked by June 30th, 2018 has been shared with the team.

It sounds odd. Please correct it. Thanks.
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centrox
 
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Reply Tue 13 Mar, 2018 02:42 pm
We first need to know what it means.
tsarstepan
 
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Reply Wed 14 Mar, 2018 07:43 am
@centrox,
centrox wrote:

We first need to know what it means.


Seconding this sentiment. But for now? I'll drop this stab of a guess:
Our new target of $4 million has been set for June 30th, 2018. The team has been notified of this new goal.
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ekename
 
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Reply Wed 14 Mar, 2018 07:33 pm
@refrain77,
The team's revised goal is $4 million in sales by the end of this financial year.

Unless it's meant to be:

The team's revised sales target is $4 million for the June Quarter.

Unless it's indecipherable.
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