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Reply Thu 1 Feb, 2018 08:41 am
Is this sentence clear:
We are still waiting for the customer to approve the estimate that we provided for the multiple changes that he wants to make before we can move forward.
or should it include:
"estimate that we provided to him for the multiple changes"
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Reply Thu 1 Feb, 2018 10:32 am
@dabbadabba,
It's fine as written.
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