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Which is clearer:

The pack out was delayed by a few days because the customer wasn't ready to proceed.
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The pack out start date was delayed by a few days because the customer wasn't ready to proceed.

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@dabbadabba,

They're both equally clear, but if you're referring specifically to the pack-out start date, then the second one is clearer.

I'd use a hyphen between "pack" and "out."

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