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Reply Mon 15 Jan, 2018 02:23 pm
I am very proud to be friends with people from both the ends of the spectrum. The homophobes & lesbian porn freaks . Apparently,they are the same people!
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Reply Mon 15 Jan, 2018 02:48 pm
@Cocojay,
Cocojay wrote:

I am very proud to be friends with people from both the ends of the spectrum. The homophobes & lesbian porn freaks . Apparently,they are the same people!

"from both ends of the spectrum"
No space before the period after 'freaks'.
A space is needed after the comma following 'apparently'.
The message conveyed by the sentences is dubious.
Cocojay
 
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Reply Mon 15 Jan, 2018 03:04 pm
@centrox,
I can't thank you enough for always there to correct me sir.
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