Is this sentence correct?

Pat, I'd'v not used a comma, but otherwise it seems okay

However with no context I wonder if Funding Request

Then also wonderin' if there shud be a 'a' or 'the' b4 'submission' or 'request'

...whether that second 'the' s/b cap


So let's hear from t'other guys !!

The sentence is irrelevant given that you don't claim responsibility for the submission.

In my previous position I was responsible for the compilation of our nation's funding request to the World Bank which required extensive research within a tight time frame.

Your sentence is OK.

Just use "I was recruited ....."

I would question the relevance of the information, if the deadline was not met then it doesn't make any odds. If you were not responsible for the deadline being met it's also irrelevant. If the deadline was met, and you were responsible, you need to say that.

When I worked for XXXX, I was able to ensure that the submission for funding from the Word Bank went through smoothly despite only joining the company forty days before the deadline for applications.

Scrib, I don't like that'n' somehow. There seems to be a subtle implication that there are several World Banks, only the one of which required compilation of a funding request

Somebody help me here, give us the tech language for what I'm tryin' to say