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Ways to use implication in my fiction writing?

 
 
Reply Fri 29 Sep, 2017 08:59 pm
I'm trying to find ways to make my fiction piece shorter or to make exposition snappier/punchier by using implication; for instance, I guess a character having fingernails bitten to the quick can reveal that he is constantly nervous/edgy or his life is hard, or if the way she dresses seems to indicate that she's forced buy her clothing at a thrift store giving some idea of her hardship and income level, without having to drag out miles of long boring narrative..but was just wondering if anyone might have ideas I haven't thought of yet thx.
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jespah
 
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Reply Sat 30 Sep, 2017 05:01 am
@DiamondRainPrincess,
Consider what personal hygiene items cost. Shampoo, conditioner, toothpaste, etc. In fact, let's just consider those three. What would your character look like if she could only afford two of those things? How about if she could only afford one, or none?

I recall reading a piece in the NY Times several years ago, nonfiction, about a homeless family. The thing that struck me the most was that the mother didn't own any underwear. It was a luxury. Instead (this was a warmer part of the country; I think it may have been Arizona), she wore these little flowered shorts which she washed out every night. She may have had two pairs of them to alternate. No bra, and she certainly needed one as she had had two kids.

That image has stuck with me for some 10 or 20 years.
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centrox
 
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Reply Sat 30 Sep, 2017 05:41 am
He wore the rank badges of a major in the police artillery. What does that say about society in my story?
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