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Reply Fri 9 Jun, 2017 02:04 am
Hello guys,
I'm not sure regarding to the grammar used in this sentence:
"In the second scenario, a greater amount of fuel is consumed daily with respect to the first scenario."
Can you please have a look on it and let me know if there's something I can do to improve ?
Kind Regards,
Nate
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Reply Fri 9 Jun, 2017 05:56 am
@NATE1197,
Replace 'with respect to' with 'compared to'. Also you can omit the final 'scenario'.
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Reply Fri 9 Jun, 2017 08:20 am
@centrox,
Thanks ! I knew I'm missing something...
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