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Question: Discuss the advantage(s) and problems of cellphones.
The world today is getting more and more globalized, so it seems that to speak English is very important. This is because you can’t communicate with foreign people if you can’t speak English. When you want to learn a language, you should learn it as soon as you can. If you had learned English in elementary school, you could have mastered it before you begin working and go out into the world. If you start learning in elementary school, you can learn English about twice as long as today’s students. These days, I often hear that Japanese people can’t speak English very well and communicate with people from other countries, so education should be improved as soon as possible. (119)