Can anyone give me opinion about essay for TOEFL

I personally believe that internet is one of most important invention for human beings at this period of time. Some people may not support me, but if we take a look how internet helpful can be, everyone will think twice before give their final opinion. I feel this way for several reasons and I will explain it broadly in the following essay.
First of all, Internet is something what connect us with the rest of the world. There is a couple of examples. I remember when I was in high school, I was studying in capital city and I was separate from my parents and family, I rarely was talking with them because long talks via cellphones were expensive to afford, but today we are lucky to have Skype and video calls and all that for free. Furthermore, I am living now on a different continent, but I less missing my parents, than I did in high school. On the other hand there is a lot of social media, like Facebook, Instagram, Twitter and they are more than useful in helping to stay in touch with our friends who are living in different states, also social media are great platform to share our ideas, fears, thoughts with people all over the world. As I already mention social media, I would like to add fact that through online platform, a lot of couples enjoying truly love to have each other.
Secondly, educative channels are something with great approach for adults as well as for kids since childhood. I have nephew who is four years old, my sister choosing for him educative programs and allow him to watch them every day for one hour and, I can tell from what I saw, that this programs are really beneficial. My nephew already know numbers and letters, also he is very enthusiastic to learn even more, I am glad for him and looking forward to see how far his curiosity will go.
Furthermore, online platform helping us to find good restaurants, good doctors, all kind of services what we usually use on daily basis, even I can not imagine myself to drive car without navigation.
In sum up, there is too many reasons how we can benefit from using internet. If you asking me, if I would like to live in past without internet, I would strongly refute, because In my view of point internet is our future and I am looking forward to see what is next coming.