@rino,
1) Having started out as an absolute beginner, only recently having learned your language in only a ten months’ time, (you might be surprised to leearn that) I nonetheless ended up with adequate proficiency to successfully attend an English-speaking college (?????)
2) Technology impacts our life more than ever, yet much left undiscovered
Still Rino your grammar seems okay
But guys, what can we do with 'adequate proficiency'