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Sat 12 Nov, 2016 01:56 pm
Hi able2know forum writers,
Could you please tell me if my English sentence makes sense and also if my punctuation is correct where I put the commas? Is my sentence too long?
My attempt: Along with my other roles of being a mother, teacher, aunt, companion, house owner, administrator(secretary) and now thanks to Word Reference, I can also say that I´m a writer.
Thank you so much. {-:
Omit 'being a'. Insert comma after 'and now'. Consider 'I am a writer' rather that I'm a writer' if the intended readership is academic. Avoid brackets. Consider rewriting 'administrator(secretary)' which needs at least a space after 'administrator'. How did Word Reference make you a 'writer'? If that's all it takes, maybe I should try it.
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