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Could somebody tell me if there is any mistake in my CV ?

 
 
Ziggy13
 
Reply Mon 31 Oct, 2016 08:51 am
Hi ! I am a Frenchman and I am looking for somebody to tell me if there is any mistake in my curriculum ! Thank you !

"Interests

Classic literature ; political and economic news ; experimental electronic music ; South-Korean films.

Work experience

Decathlon France December 2009 — August 2010
Order Picker / Shipper
Order preparation and truck loading ; utilization of a class 1 rider-pallet truck.

Simon Lapuis Social Center (Paris) November 2013 — August 2014
Civic Service
Endorsement of the associative sector in the La Gardère neighborhood ; participation in the organization of important events in the neighborhood (ex. The Globules Festival) ; completion of a socio-ethnographic survey on the La Gardère district inhabitants in order to construct a “social project” for the 2014-2017 period.

New Zealand September 2014 — February 2015
Volunteer in the Context of the "World-Wide Opportunities on Organic Farms" Network
Participation in creation and implementation of sustainable development programs ; communication in English only ; collective work with people from numerous nationalities and social environments.

Maison du Vin Social Center March 2015 — April 2015
Instructor of a Free Informatic Course for Old People
Teaching of the necessary instructions to use desktop tools and to use the Internet ; work with people unfamiliar with the computing environment.

Education

BA in Social Sciences September 2005 — June 2008
University of Strasbourg
Social Science Methodology ; Economy ; French Law ; Contemporary History ; Demography ; Statistics ; Organizational Studies ; Urban Policy ; Cultural Studies ; Sociology of Deviance ; Rural Sociology ; Sociology of Religions. Writing of a research paper entitled “French Public Policies”, directed by Estelle Fraise.

Master's degree 1st year “Political Science” ("Maîtrise" degree) September 2015 — June 2016
Lumière University Lyon 2
Public Policies ; Sociology of Law ; Social Movements Analysis ; French and American Migration Policies and Migratory Flows Analysis ; International Relations Theory and Sociology ; Sociology of Working Class. Writing of a sociological biography entitled “The case of Salie Moreau”, directed by Philippe Strange.

Master's degree 1st year “Public Management” September 2016 — June 2016
Institute of Political Sciences (Sciences Po)
Multi-level Governance ; Accounting and Interpretation of Financial Information ; History and Sociology of Management ; Administrative Sciences ; Public Finances ; Democratic Transitions Analysis ; Voting Methods Analysis. Writing of a research paper entitled “Reinforce the Participation of the Most Socially Marginalized People in Projects of Environmental Conservation and Reduction of Social and Economical Inequalities”, ordered by the CLAPS."
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Sturgis
 
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Reply Mon 31 Oct, 2016 10:25 am
@Ziggy13,
There are a few items which could use changing.

To start with, eliminate the quotation marks (")

Next, instead of using the semicolon (Wink, when listing interests, use a comma (,)

It is standard to begin your work experience with the most recent or current place of employment and then the one prior to that and so on. The same holds true for your educational listings.

One item which clearly needs changing; is, your Masters Degree for Public Management. It would be basically impossible to have attended from September 2016-June 2016 (unless you're using a time machine).


List your personal interests (classic literature, political and economic news, etc.) last.

In order: work, education, skills (typing, printing press machine operator {state which press machine(s)}),lastly, list your interests and activities (try to keep it nonpolitical).

Likely there may be other items which need adjustment; hopefully, someone will come along and let you know.

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