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Fri 1 Oct, 2004 04:18 am
I want to live in an island , where is nobody can tell what to do , or why you did it .Where is no Mr... our school principal and where I can be with my girl ..my girl
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I want to be a warrior there and fight to help people .On a horse and with a sword and I want to say poetry under the moon light for my beautiful lady..
I just wanted to say this . It was in my mind for a moment
That's cool, navigator. Respect.
you might find yourself doing better if you live on an island though.
BPB, you beat me to the "Help, help I'm in an island" quip, but navigator is learning English, so we shouldn't be too tough on him. I thought the sentiments were great. I may come back to this, and write it up in verse of some sort...with navigator's permission of course.
will you talk to a soccer ball too?
It's ok with me cav. I know that I stink sometimes
I knew that something wrong this time ...go a head :wink:
Anyone with a thirst for knowledge never 'stinks' in my book. Okay, let me try this out (I'm running with it, so there will be some 'artistic interpretation'):
I wish I lived on an island,
with no authority or task.
All I ask is to be with my girl,
she with princess curls,
the only one who can complete
my secret world.
I shall be a warrior,
armor-clad on a tall white horse,
defending my love's freedom,
with sword in hand.
They will sing of my good deeds,
and I will write the ballads,
to recite to my love
under the moon,
beside a welcoming fire.
Thanks cav. I didn't want to write a poem basically , I just wrote like this .You are kind
and I want everybody to correct me when I make mistakes .That's fine with me and that's why I'm here with you people.
Not to pat my own back, but feel free to present the poem to your girl, as long as she has curly hair.
Yeah, get yer Tom Hanks references clear.
wonder why its 'volleyball', but not 'soccerball'...