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Fri 25 Mar, 2016 09:36 am
(Not written by me. I just wonder)
1 the year end
auld lang syne , my dear
into eternity
2 long grass,
tall nettles-
no mower
3 AMATORY DESIRE
the need
the longing
the touch,
a kiss-
a couple in
ectasy
4 REQUIEM
nothing-
then silence,
sad faces!
then tears,
emotion,
regret-
then pain
To me, the poem lacks the depth to touch or startle. It leaves the mind to seek to fill in its own poem, which can bear no relevance to the actual poem.
@oristarA,
I see an attempt to evoke imagery, not specific enough, not personal enough. No real continuity to the stanzas. In my opinion it is not a good poem.
Spot on, guys.
Far from being creative, those poems.
But that does not mean the writer should quit trying. Many of my own poems are not better than that, but, I am proud of others that I have written.
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