@FBM,
FBM wrote:
The comparative clause [received] "fewer economic rewards for their ability and hard work than were uneducated entrepreneurs" can be simplified: [received] fewer rewards than uneducated entrepreneurs [received].
Of course the simplified version is crystal clear and that is exactly why I posted the thread - "should the "were" be removed."
But if the author insisted that the "were" is necessary, the grammar would be not very easy to understand:
they were upset that they were receiving fewer economic rewards for their ability and hard work than
were uneducated entrepreneurs.
It seems that the author has used a reversed structure:
they were upset that they were receiving fewer economic rewards for their ability and hard work than uneducated entrepreneurs (
were receiving
their economic rewards).
But such grammatical structure seems not correct. Or be straight, the use of "were" here is not correct. It should be removed altogether.
What do you think?