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Sat 28 Nov, 2015 12:21 pm
"Today an agonizing accident has took place in my region. A little boy died in the collide with a lorry going towards Dhaka. Lorry escaped quickly from the spot running over the dead body of child. If the lorry could be inhibited, the worst misfortune destined to the fate of lorry's driver. Though people failed to inhibit the lorry, some people presenting on the spot saved the number of lorry. some among witnesses claimed that the little boy also had liability for taking place this accident. Suddenly he started running across the road and unexpectedly a lorry reached in front of the boy. The incident happened so fast that lorry driver had nothing to do. The actual liable person for that accident is boy's parent. Some parents like parent of the boy are apathetic about their children. They don't keep up-date news of their children. This boy was getting about out home, still its parent were careless like as usual where their children were."
Here are some sentences which are not correct grammatically and sound unnatural. Please find them, and if it is possible, write the correct form of them.
Every one of those sentences is wrong, and no, i'm not going to rewrite them for you.
@farmerman,
Heres a ahorter form
Hit run with fatality, male minor. BOLO . lorry, with LN XXXX.
ERQ's / bystanders state that parents also involved W/ depraved in difference.
@Azah,
Today an excruciating accident took place in our vicinity: A little boy died in the collision with a lorry headed towards Dhaka that quickly escaped, running over the child's body. But if the lorry had stopped, a lesser misfortune might have destined to its driver since some witnesses saved its number while others on the spot claimed the boy shared liability. Because at its approach he had suddenly and unexpectedly started to run across the road, the incident happened so fast its driver had no recourse. Thus actual liability lay with boy's parents, inasmuch as many are so apathetic about the behavior of their children, especially whereabouts. Although his home nearby, still his parent were careless like so many others, ignorant how and where their children play
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