Please Proof Read Paper

We try to be helpful here if you pinpoint where your questions are.

Proofreading is a profession, people charge for that, and most of us don't want to spend the time on matters you could look up on google, but will happily argue about regarding some point.

Ok, sorry didn't know how this site works. I guess my question would be about how the main point of my paper is the relationship between expression and violence, but would the analysis in the concluding sentences detract from my point. Specifically, when I bring up a point like music in this scene proves that music is related to a characters use of violence, but in the last few sentences I talk about why the director does that. For example, violence is a coping method for increased emotions.
P.S. If somehow someone can edit my last post that would be great or better yet delete it.

No, that's ok, don't worry. We can get reactive here, but are pretty interested in language.

I'm not a proof reader or editor but may have a look, and others are smarter.

Is there a way to delete this forum. I was in the spur of the moment and did this stupid thing. Now I hope nobody will steal this paper or I will be counted as plagiarizing a paper because I was freaking out.

I understand your worry, and think it unlikely but you never know. It is probably too late to delete, there's a time limit, but you could click on Contact Us at the bottom of the page, the mods might understand and then come back, should you wish, with less than the whole thing.