@vmtct,
Vm, some of us are not entirely sure how to approach your posting. To do it justice few of us will expend the hours required. This not meant as criticism of your grammar or style but let's hope others suggest means for you to curtail the job or divide into smaller number of specific tasks
Canada is among the top countries that attract thousands of students around the world coming there to further their studies…...but don't like 'cause the trailing phrase is assonant
My very first reaction: The "there" is unnecessary. However my Better Half, who is much smarter than I, disagrees. She says also incidentally that "of students" is redundant because who else would visit to study
…who come furthering their studies
…who come to further their studies
Canada is among top countries
…….attracting thousands of students around the world
…….attracting thousands of students from around the world
…….attracting thousands from around the world
…...who come there to further their studies
…..attract thousands around the world for further study
….around the world who come for further study
….from around the world for further study
,,,around the world who come for further study
Yes, no, all you critics terribly angry at all times about nearly everything, "assonant" isn't
exactly the word I want