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Romeo and Juliet thesis statement help?
I need to write a persuasive essay about how Romeo and Juliet were just infatuated with each other and were not truly in love. I have my evidence to make my thesis statement, but I need a little help with putting it together. Here are my choices to use as evidence in the statement to prove that R&J were only infatuated with each other ( I need to use three):
1. Romeo was in 'love' with Rosaline, but quickly fell in 'love' with Juliet when he saw her beauty
2. Romeo and Juliet declared their love for each other without actually getting to know each other
3. Romeo was in love with being in love( he just wanted to love someone)
4. They fell in love with each others appearances
I don't like how my evidence is worded. Also, I don't think my ideas are very strong or clear, so if you have any other evidence as to why Romeo and Juliet were merely infatuated with each other and not truly in love, please let me know!! Also, I don't want to make my evidence too redundant. Here is how I need my thesis statement to be constructed: Although some people may argue otherwise, I believe that Romeo and Juliet were just infatuated with each other because ................, ...................., and...............................