@flipflap,
its iyt for a starter son, but daang man u gotta put in mo **** in it
u need use metaphors n be more lyrical aswel man like dis
It was a fairytale like a dream, wishing i was freed by January until i met trevor
We would roll together, thought we would stick forever but it was a never
It seems awesome, it looks awesome, but dang we was partners like co-defendants
But now…you don’t even see me, alls people can remember was my last sentence
u get it?, the metaphors is sumfin u double like:
i speak, sleep, eat, peak (then make em into a lyric)
i speak then go to sleep after that **** i eat and keep it real peak
but make sense wid it tho son
inbox me for question iiyt
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