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Are my lyrics good?

 
 
Reply Mon 26 Oct, 2009 01:14 pm
Are these lyrics any good?
I'm aware that i'm not the greatest songwriter ever , so please be nice (but honest) Smile and if you could think of a name, that would be cool.

Verse 1
Are we both too shy to say hello
Will I find the courage I sure hope so
I want to learn your name for good
I know I know I should

Chorus
I hope you won’t say no
If I ask you to go
I hope you might say yes
If I my feelings are expressed

Verse 2
I wish I could sometimes find a way
To talk to you without breaking away
I want to be close to you
I know I know I do

Chorus
I hope you won’t say no
If I ask you to go
I hope you might say yes
If my feelings are expressed
Bridge
Verse 3
(but) maybe I don’t want you as much as I thought
Maybe you’re not the person that I first thought
Still want to learn your name for good
I know I know I should


Thanks, JL
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Reply Tue 27 Oct, 2009 06:18 am
@jl3131994,
They're pretty good for a pop tune.
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