Jorgi there are some mistakes in your writing but the sentiment you express Is too beautiful to be concerned about errors.
[quote]Jorgi there are some mistakes in your writing but the sentiment you express Is too beautiful to be concerned about errors. [/quote]
Oh .. Unfortunate !
I will try to be better in the next text.
Thank u Mr.Dadpad
Hello, Jorgi!
Do you want us to rewrite your sentences using better English grammar? Would that help you? Or, are you more concerned about communicating your meaning? (I think you are doing a fine job of that!)
Here's an example. Tell me if this is helpful.
It is beautiful to be an optimistic in this life ..
CORRECT: It is beautiful to be optimistic in this life...
OR...It is beautiful to be an optimist in this life...
[quote]Hello, Jorgi! [/quote]
Hello Eva !
pleased to meet you !
[quote]Do you want us to rewrite your sentences using better English grammar? Would that help you?[/quote]
Yes I happy if you do it !
If it is not tired for you .
[quote]Or, are you more concerned about communicating your meaning?
(I think you are doing a fine job of that!) [/quote]
I am interested in both casec
because
The second one dependent on the first one .
also I can say the structure sentence is most important for me .
I want to talk good in the meaning and structure
for this reason ,
I always ask members correcting my sentences if it is contains mistakes .
[quote]Here's an example. Tell me if this is helpful.
It is beautiful to be an optimistic in this life ..
CORRECT: It is beautiful to be optimistic in this life...
OR...It is beautiful to be an optimist in this life... [/quote]
Thank u very much Eva ..
Yes I happy if you do it ! - YES, I WILL BE GLAD/HAPPY IF YOU CORRECT ME.
If it is not tired for you . I HOPE IT DOESN'T TIRE YOU OUT.
I am interested in both caseS because the second one IS dependent on the first one. HOWEVER, the structure sentence is MORE important TO me.
I want to BE PROFICIENT in the meaning and structure.
THIS IS WHY I always ask members TO correct my sentences if THEY contains mistakes.
NO SPACES BEFORE PUNCTUATION!!
I am happy to help you, Jorgi!
I proofread a lot of student papers, so I am used to doing this. I may not have a lot of time, but I will try to help when I can.
Here are two more:
I always ask members correcting my sentences if it is contains mistakes .
CORRECT:
I always ask members to correct my sentences if they contain mistakes.
also I can say the structure sentence is most important for me .
CORRECT:
Also, I would say the sentence structure is the most important to me.
I'm not being mean, roger. She asked for help, and we can do that. Since I'm a teacher/writer/editor, I'm just trying to be helpful. With very few exceptions, I don't correct people unless they ask. Jorgi asked.
Jorgi seems like a very nice person who sincerely wants us to help her improve her written English skills. I think that's very smart of her. If I were trying to learn how to write in a different language, I would love it if someone would be kind enough to help me.
She is very expressive, isn't she! (I love that about her writing.) When I offer suggestions, I am trying very hard not to change her meaning.
In fact , I don't knoe what's Mr.Roger said ,
IN FACT, i DON'T KNOW WHAT MR ROGER SAID,
A comma comes directly after the word, you seem to put a space in after the word. Putting a space in is incorrect.
but I really happy for your help me in English Language .
BUT I AM REALLY HAPPY FOR YOU TO HELP ME WITH THE ENGLISH LANGAUGE.
CAN YOU SEE WHERE THE PUNCTUATION MARKS ARE IN MY SENTENCES? DIRECTLY AFTER THE WORD.
, but I really happy for your help me in English Language . 
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