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(1)these bitches are hurt
the kinda faggots that were a skirt
slice your neck till it squirts
when you flirt with death you'll be eating dirt
(2)my methods gore
bloodshed and metaphors
i eat what youve bled like a carnivoure
im a the rap raptor
(3)my shits classic
dateing back to the jurrasic
my tounges elastic
like mr fantastic
(4)do i need to say anything else
im the sword on orions belt
my lyrics so hot they make the sun melt
(5)this is a masterpiece
when i diss i leave the masses deceased
i drop more bombs than the middle east
(6)the fact is your obsolete
i attack to the beat
crack your skull off the street
(7)Apocalyptic with cryptic chaos
your body wont be found I make sure you stay lost
a verbal hollacost crime boss
(8) i show im sick by kickin a man till hes dead
from his head hes bled
i cause gore and bloodshed
(9)and once more Ive said I wont be happy till your killed
drowned in red your throat spilled
out the blood floods like a tsunami
(10)turn your bones to origami
a one man army
you cant harm me
or dis arm me
(11)i know this
these faggo*s are doing this to get noticed
my diagnosis is im verbal osmosis
(12)Your mentals sacrificed
when my instrumental device
slice dice you into trice
its still not suffice my lyrics cold as ice
(13)A verbal massacre
I'll be the last to stir
the master of the last word
aka the bastard
(14)the mold broke
smolded and smoked
left blood soaked
(15)hold you in a choke grip
every script laced with hollow tips
empty a clip
rip the flesh of your lips

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thats some good **** like. I give it a 8/10

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yea peti your battleing skills aint bad but you need to work on them i smashed you

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theprofessor wrote:

yea peti your battleing skills aint bad but you need to work on them i smashed you

you are shi.t proffesor, you rhyme with no subsatance or wordplay.
stop talkin yourself up or i will battle your arse like you've never seen.
You no i will kick your arse too.
Do you even no the meaning of wordplay fool.. its verbal wit
and not crap that only rhymes

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yea slippz you were right i admit but i was going with what i thought none had told me other wise

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you know I think anything that the prof spits is good so I don't know what to rate it as.......
it would be really unfair if I had to rate it against someone else...cause you know that i'd choose the profs rhymes over anyone else...
but unless I knew that he was up against someone good like BVC or Insane...then i'd be cool to rate it.....

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why do you like my rhymes over others

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its ok i no nothing of poetry and read only 3 versus, but i think its pretty good

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"You cant make an album with twelve battle tracks when your punch lines are wack and you can't make hyenas laugh" - Class

I agree with my Nova Scotian counterpart on this one

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im back an im out of jail
the fact is im out on bail
getting a drink till i see some pink
get um to suck my dink
untill seamen is left extinct
i leave my sign in ink
reality at its brink
clink clink clang
**** i broke my thang
click click bang
a hood part of no gang
no man can understand im a freeman
in a freeland \
free to stand
on my own two feet
any rapper ready to compete
is not complete without a beat

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Hi Professor

Glad to see you back and man you know i rate your **** highly
I dunno if you remember this:

http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=55000&postdays=0&postorder=asc&highlight=rap&start=10

but you gave me some straight talk there and I tried to write more rap - but as I'm sure you already know, I aint no rapper.

Anyway, I wanted to ask you if I can stick one of your posts from that page (Post: 1520627 -) down on my sig? Quoting you?
As any sort of writer - I'm proud of what you said there. I've never used a sig before -it would be my first if that's ok?

Also, I wrote this while you were gone - it's nothing like you rappers can do - but then I can't try and be like you fellas, I'm just trying t find my own voice.
Still, I think I wrote it as lyrics wondered what you thought I could do with it?

It's right at the bottom of this page:
http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=61822&start=20

Posted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 5:27 am Post: 1835959 - (Angry Youth)

If you don't wana talk to me here - post on my thread if you like, let me know about the signature. If I get brave, I'll try hitting you with a few more lines sometime.
Make you cringe.

Peace,
Endy

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ya go ahead endymion

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a sum of yall shood go 2 tha neverendin rap battle and spit

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thanks professor

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this is just cause i need a place to put this one well i write more for a battle read and judge it if you like

haha you all to gangsta
you fuking wangsta's
i'll smack you in the head and you'll be telling me thank ya
so before i shank ya
i point blank ya
leaveing you bloodless like i robbed your blood bank ugh
look i can grunt like 50'd
but dont front cause if we
let **** get heavy you cant lift me
and dont cross the line
cause i'll toss ya spine
in the dumpster
with the same look on your face as a 9 11 jumper
i got pychotic tendencies
im quick to rip tendons free

peace

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