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Which is correct?

 
 
Reply Sun 24 Jul, 2016 08:52 pm
Which is correct?

#1. The more she'll get hurt, the more indifferent person she'll become.
#2. The more she'll get hurt, the more indifferent of person she'll become.

I thought #1 is grammatically more correct, but some of my friends said #2 sounds more natural.

I appreciate any advice. Thanks.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jul, 2016 03:14 am
Neither one of them, and i can't believe that either was written by a native speaker--at least not by a decently educated native speaker. The verb tenses are goofy.

The more she gets hurt, the more of an indifferent person she'll become.

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dalehileman
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jul, 2016 10:51 am
@ujeongkim,
or "The more she's hurt the more indifferent she becomes"
Presumably she's a person

Yes I know, Kim, we were asked merely if the English was "correct," and I'm embellishing
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Thomas33
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jul, 2016 02:35 pm
1 is correct.
Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jul, 2016 04:27 pm
@Thomas33,
No it's not. Is English your native language? Have you been well-educated?
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