Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2016 10:31 am
More recent data have shown that 90% of New Yorkers consume less than 400 grams/day of fruits and vegetables, against 70% in the study sample.

The sentence above is trying to say that 70% of the study sample consume less than 400 grams/day of fruits and vegetables. Is the sentence written correctly/clear? Thanks very much.
  • Topic Stats
  • Top Replies
  • Link to this Topic
Type: Question • Score: 2 • Views: 566 • Replies: 6
No top replies

 
View best answer, chosen by Doubtful
dalehileman
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2016 01:29 pm
@Doubtful,
No Doubt it's saying there were two studies giving different results
Forgive pun
Doubtful
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2016 04:34 pm
@dalehileman,
Sorry, I did not express myself well. Yes, it is two studies. I was wondering if that was clear and if the sentence was constructed properly. Same for the other question. Thanks.
dalehileman
  Selected Answer
 
  2  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2016 04:37 pm
@Doubtful,
Quite welcome, now I understand. The sentence is okay
0 Replies
 
Sage of Main Street
 
  2  
Reply Sat 16 Jul, 2016 08:03 am
@Doubtful,
OTHER COLLEGE GRADUATES ARE "DIPLOMA DUMBOS"

Thank you for using "data" as a plural. I don't respect the opinions of anyone who thinks it is a singular.
fresco
 
  1  
Reply Sat 16 Jul, 2016 01:09 pm
@Sage of Main Street,
So presumably you don't respect anyone who thinks 'agenda' is singular ? Wink
dalehileman
 
  1  
Reply Sat 16 Jul, 2016 01:16 pm
@fresco,
Now fully singular

https://www.google.com/?gws_rd=ssl#q=is+the+word+agenda+singular+or+plural

Fres thanks, I agree w your implication, indeed controversial

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Data_(word)
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

deal - Question by WBYeats
Let pupils abandon spelling rules, says academic - Discussion by Robert Gentel
Please, I need help. - Question by imsak
Is this sentence grammatically correct? - Question by Sydney-Strock
"come from" - Question by mcook
concentrated - Question by WBYeats
 
  1. Forums
  2. » against
Copyright © 2024 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.07 seconds on 04/23/2024 at 10:36:35