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WBYeats
 
Reply Sun 23 Aug, 2015 01:12 pm
-John's first experience in participating US Gay Pride sent him astonishment upon the very worldly predicament that the homosexual face.

Do you agree my corrections?:

1. experience OF; IN is wrong.
2. SENT should be GAVE.
3. UPON is wrong, and AT should be used.
4. Omitting IN after 'participating' is wrong.
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McTag
 
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Reply Sun 23 Aug, 2015 01:56 pm
@WBYeats,

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John's first experience in participating US Gay Pride sent him astonishment upon the very worldly predicament that the homosexual face.


More or less. But the whole sentence reads badly.

Try

John's first experience of participating in the US Gay Pride movement (celebrations? parade?) made him astonished at the (many, real, everyday, acute) predicaments/ problems that homosexuals face.
dalehileman
 
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Reply Sun 23 Aug, 2015 04:45 pm
@WBYeats,
John's first experience participating in US Gay Pride astonished him at the very worldly predicament the homosexual faces
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WBYeats
 
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Reply Mon 24 Aug, 2015 12:23 pm
Thank you Tctag, but for dalehileman, why

-the homosexual faceS

?

The old, the young, the rich, etc. are plural; or is it a typo?
dalehileman
 
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Reply Mon 24 Aug, 2015 12:55 pm
@WBYeats,
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John's first experience participating in US Gay Pride astonished him at the very worldly predicament the homosexual faceS
That's really a good Q, WB, in fact one I had asked myself as I was composing my response
WBYeats
 
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Reply Wed 26 Aug, 2015 01:35 am
@dalehileman,
No no no, Dale, you haven't answered my question; do you think in American English 'the homosexual', 'the rich', etc. are both singular and plural?
dalehileman
 
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Reply Wed 26 Aug, 2015 11:15 am
@WBYeats,
I'd say so WB but don't quote me
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WBYeats
 
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Reply Wed 26 Aug, 2015 11:46 am
@McTag,
Thanks for supporting me, but today my friend (non-native) saddened me by telling me that we could say

- a doctor with experience in (not OF) dealing with patients

and that I was wrong; do you think the sentence above is a different structure?
McTag
 
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Reply Wed 26 Aug, 2015 02:33 pm
@WBYeats,

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- a doctor with experience in (not OF) dealing with patients


- a doctor with experience in dealing with patients
- a doctor with experience of dealing with patients

To me, there is no real difference here between those two. Both equally grammatical, both meaning the same.
In deference to your friend, I guess that the first might be slightly more commonly seen.

If I were to differentiate between the two, I'd use a different example: IN meaning in a particular field (such as geriatrics) and OF meaning of a particular problem (such as hernia).
But that is a fine distinction.
dalehileman
 
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Reply Wed 26 Aug, 2015 03:41 pm
@McTag,
Mac I'm impressed by that distinction. I had a feeling there was a slight diff in meaning but couldn't express it
McTag
 
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Reply Thu 27 Aug, 2015 02:10 am
@dalehileman,

Thank you, kind sir. I'm sorry if I was rude to you yeaterday. Sometimes I get a bit frustrated.
dalehileman
 
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Reply Thu 27 Aug, 2015 11:54 am
@McTag,
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Thank you, kind sir.
Quite welcome

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I'm sorry if I was rude to you yeaterday.
Oh Mac quite all right. Contrast with S. in other recent posrtings

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Sometimes I get a bit frustrated.
Don't we all
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WBYeats
 
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Reply Sat 29 Aug, 2015 12:26 pm
Thank you Mctag.
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