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Mon 27 Oct, 2014 11:22 am
Which is correct (if either are correct!):
"We offer a private network to members, who wish to connect with others in a safe and secure way, worldwide."
OR
"We offer a private network to members, who wish to connect with others in a safe and secure way, throughout the world."
Thank you in advance for any assistance and/or suggestions!
Both are fine; neither needs any commas.
@ginaxxx,
Quote:"We offer a private network to members, who wish to connect with others in a safe and secure way, worldwide."
Con above quite right,. However, removing the first changes meaning. With the comma all members wish and are offered the net; whereas without, only those members are offered who also wish to connect
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