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WBYeats
 
Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 02:18 am
Are they all correct?

1. Temperature in October is milder and less scorching.
2. Temperatures in October are milder and less scorching.
3. The temperature in October is milder and less scorching.
4. The temperatures in October are milder and less scorching.

Would it be better to change IN to OF?
 
oralloy
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 03:46 am
@WBYeats,

#1 sounds wrong to me.

#2 and #3 sound the best to me.

#4 sounds good to me, but maybe not quite as good as #2 and #3.

Stay with "IN". "OF" sounds wrong to me.
dalehileman
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 11:29 am
@oralloy,
Well WB, Al has covered it pretty well
Doubtful
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 11:38 am
@WBYeats,
Question for natives:

The temperatures in October are milder and less scorching.

In = October of any year.

The temperatures of October are milder and less scorching.

Of = this October, now

BTW, I think "the" should be there because you are specifying what temperatures you are talking about (of October).
oralloy
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 11:39 am
@dalehileman,
dalehileman wrote:
Well WB, Al has covered it pretty well

Al??

Short for Alloy?
oralloy
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 11:43 am
@Doubtful,
Doubtful wrote:
The temperatures of October are milder and less scorching.

Of = this October, now

The "of" sounds wrong to me.
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One Eyed Mind
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 11:44 am
I disagree.

"Of" is more stabilizing than "In".

Why?

Temperatures are conjoined with particular parts of the year. I wouldn't say that October contains a temperature - I would say that October attains a temperature. The temperature "of" October is so and so Vs. The temperature "in" October is so and so. The former is a conjunction; the latter is a containment.
dalehileman
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 11:45 am
@oralloy,
Quote:
Al??
Sorry Ora, my head is only halfway functioning this morn
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 11:47 am
@One Eyed Mind,
Quote:
"Of" is more stabilizing than "In"
Doubtless Mind, you're technically correct; but "in" is more nearly collo
One Eyed Mind
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 11:56 am
@dalehileman,
Of is more accurate than In.

I explained why already. Temperatures are not "in" the time of the year. Temperatures are "of" the time of the year. Temperatures and the time of the year are conjoined - they are not separated into two entirely different phenomenons. It's the time of the year that changes the temperature - it's not independent temperature in an independent time of the year.
dalehileman
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 11:57 am
@One Eyed Mind,
Thanks Mind, but still "in" is the collo
One Eyed Mind
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 12:05 pm
@dalehileman,
Why is it the colloquial verdict, when it's wrong?
dalehileman
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 02:00 pm
@One Eyed Mind,
Quote:
Why is it the colloquial verdict, when it's wrong?
Much collo is "wrong"

Eg, Mind, see

http://able2know.org/topic/256435-1
One Eyed Mind
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 02:12 pm
@dalehileman,
Of course it is, which is why I'm not giving it any room to breathe with its unorthodox interpretation of communication
dalehileman
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 03:19 pm
@One Eyed Mind,
Quote:
I'm not giving it any room to breathe
Good work Mind, hang in there. The technicalities are important to many ESL
One Eyed Mind
 
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Reply Sat 4 Oct, 2014 03:23 pm
@dalehileman,
Evil Snake Lords...?
WBYeats
 
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Reply Sun 5 Oct, 2014 04:05 am
Thank you~
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Miller
 
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Reply Sun 5 Oct, 2014 07:15 am
@WBYeats,
Correct:
3. The temperature in October is milder and less scorching.
4. The temperatures in October are milder and less scorching.
Miller
 
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Reply Sun 5 Oct, 2014 07:17 am
@Doubtful,
Doubtful wrote:

Question for natives:

The temperatures in October are milder and less scorching.

In = October of any year.

The temperatures of October are milder and less scorching.

Of = this October, now

BTW, I think "the" should be there because you are specifying what temperatures you are talking about (of October).


Correct:The temperatures in October are milder and less scorching.

Implied is ..in the MONTH of October...
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Sun 5 Oct, 2014 11:47 am
@One Eyed Mind,
Quote:
Evil Snake Lords...?
English as Second Language

Tho I like yours better
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