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Can someone verify this is grammatically correct?

 
 
Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2014 04:02 pm
A traumatized rape victim searches for peace and purpose, only to land in a cult whose leader believes himself to be Jesus Christ reincarnated, and she, his Mary Magdalene.

it's a logline.
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2014 04:06 pm
@PotSmoker99,
Sounds fine to me, Pot
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Setanta
 
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Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2014 04:08 pm
Yeah, it's OK. You will probably get a lot of people in here to tell you their idea of how better to have written it. But there are no grammatical errors in your text.
PotSmoker99
 
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Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2014 07:45 pm
@Setanta,
thanks, nerds. MU HAHAH HAHAHA
Setanta
 
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Reply Thu 25 Sep, 2014 03:19 am
You're welcome, dickhead.
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Lordyaswas
 
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Reply Thu 25 Sep, 2014 03:31 am
@PotSmoker99,
PotSmoker99 wrote:

thanks, nerds. MU HAHAH HAHAHA


I'm guessing 21 going on 11?
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