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Fri 29 Aug, 2014 07:33 am
My teacher took -5 for my sentence and underlined the word English.
Romans brought Christianity, the Vikings were Pagans and the Anglo,Saxon and Jutes contributed to male dominated loyalty culture. They were keen to loyalty to a leader.
@noreply23,
There is info for more than one sentence here. As it is, I have no idea what you are trying to say
@noreply23,
For more than one reason, your teacher is right.
The above posters seem to agree too..
@noreply23,
Can you try again on this thread to see if you learned what was wrong with your first composition?